Monday, January 26, 2009

Ever the Impossible


I've used everything I know and have
To try to decipher
The roughly unsanded edges of Us
And what I have come to is this:

To love you is impossible

So for now, forever,
You will remain
Ever the impossible.



Author's Notes: Yeah I know it is short. I have been saving this one for a while, because I was thinking that I was going to go back, add some stanzas, etc. But now I read it and feel there is nothing more that can really be done. It feels complete to me. What do you think?

2 Comments:

Blogger rose dawson said...

it's not what we think girl.I'm gonna use your own advice against you remember that one poem about beauty and you said if it feels complete it is. well if it feels complete it is. :)

February 1, 2009 at 4:36 PM  
Blogger ChimeraConception said...

omg rose is so right on this, even if people tell you theres more to it, in the end it always comes down to wat you think neways

February 3, 2009 at 1:12 PM  

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